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05/13/10
A beautiful mother-daughter tribute. I loved the fact that she was able to find the happiness between the pain of losing her mother.

This was a beautiful, bittersweet piece--thanks for sharing!
What a loving, caring and tender testimonial to your mother. You did a good job bringing the reader into your heart and emotions. I felt privileged!

I am also pretty much of a newbie around here and want to encourage you to check out the "writing" forum for Ann and Jan's free classes. They've been a blessing of information to develop my writing skills and are looking to help all Beginner and Intermediate writers.
05/14/10
You did a good job of emotionally drawing me in. That mother-daughter relationship is so special.
Fantastic. So tender and touching the relationship betweent mother and child. God is the ultimate critiquer. Good job.
Sweet and precious story of mother and daughter relationship. Your mother echoed the mother-heart in me about my own children in your first few paragraphs. It brought me to tears. God bless you for writing this tribute.