The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/10
I like the way this played out, Sharon was lucky to see what an influence her unfinished work had on someone who needed to know Christ. Great detail!

Just a tip--use a new paragraph every time there is a change in speakers, that way it is easier to read.

Great job--I'm glad Sharon made a new friend!
This is an old fashioned sweet story that I enjoyed very much and it left me smiling inside and out!

Check out the free writing classes in the forums under "writing", when you have a chance. Jan and Ann have basic writing classes that I am taking advantage of as a newbie around here and am learning a wealth of information. :)
Loved your story. God moved and works in strange ways which is awesome. You did an outstanding job.