The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the metaphor throughtout this poem!

I wonder if it'd be a tad smoother with a more consistent rhyme scheme and meter. There are threads on those poetic skills in the Forums on this site (link at the top of this page, look for "Jan's Writing Basics).

This poem has a lot going for it, and I'd love to read more from you!
This poem was a reminder that I need to stop and remember why I write and who I am writing for. Perhaps a couple more stanzas would have strengthened it? (I don't know much about poetry, so please take this suggestion with a grain of salt). Thank you for the reminder.
I love the encouragement in this poem
I loved your poem. Thanks for the reminder of why I write. Give God the glory. Keep writing and God bless.