The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/10
Fun poem/story!

Some of the meter could be smoothed out a bit...I have a "Writing Class" on meter in the Forums that deals with poetry with consistent meter. Would love to have you stop by!

All these attic stories this week make me wish I had an attic I could explore!
Liked your story in the form of a poem and loved the feel good ending! Definitely a fun read.
My favorite poems are those that tell a story. Good job!
Loved your poem that told a wonderful story. Old attics are fun to explore. Keep writing and God bless.