The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/10
Interesting extended metaphor!
Enjoyed and related to the depth of emotion you shared so well.
I enjoyed this very much. I like how you approached this weeks challenge. In essence our lives are likened to a manuscript. Written by the hand of God. Keep writing and God bless.
I enjoyed your testimony. In the section where you describe your condition before God's grace came in, I would suggest that you use the past tense. That way the reader can see a bit more of the transformation that God made in your life. You have me thinking that I too need to put my testimony in writing, perhaps it will help me when speaking of His grace with others. Thank you, I think I needed to read this.