The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/10
Oh, how sad!

I was confused about your characters at first--had the impression that Margaret was the boss, as she was mentioned in the first paragraph about the new job, and then not again for several paragraphs. And the MS was only mentioned at the end--maybe could have been stronger on topic?

Your characterization of Margaret was very compelling, and I'd definitely read more about her and her bittersweet life.
I liked this. It has a nice smooth flow and kept me reading until the end!
05/07/10



Tissue alert! Such truth here regarding meaning for our lives...known only to God.

And now, I'd like to hear the rest of the story.
Touching and convicting story. Liked it very much!
I was engrossed enough in this story that I still want to know about Margaret's book...was it any good?

Good job of portraying her character and the bias' that those with mental illness face on a regular basis.
What a gripping story. I wanted more. Kleenex to the rescue. I enjoyed this very much. Keep wrting and God bless.