The Official Writing Challenge
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What a profound prayer to the Author and the Finisher of our faith. Beautiful.
This is beautiful and flows so effortlessly.
04/30/10
This could be a song. Beautiful!
Beautiful! Absolutely loved this.
04/30/10
This is a magnificent poem, with thoughtful word choice. The lines flowed effortlessly, and drew warmth and compassion from my soul.

It's a writer's prayer, a praise to our Father, and a joy to read.
05/03/10
Lovely extended metaphor.

Could use some minor tweaking for consistent meter, but this is a very strong poem, one that I'd expect to see at a higher level.
Looks like Jan will get her wish, for if you enter one for this week's topic The Critique or The Review you'll be entering in the next level. Congratulations on placing so well!