The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story, The message was very powerful.

One small note-usually when I see the word nod I think of yes and shake makes me think of no. It might just be my preference, but I thought I'd mention it.

This would make a darling illustrated story or perhaps a story in the Sunday School take-home sheets.
04/30/10
Very creative! It was hard to tell where the narrative stopped and where the story began...but that's often the way of a writer's life.
Great story. I must admit I was thinking what on earth is this it's got nothing to do with writing. But the end is great. I think you achived what you set out to do.
05/03/10
This was a creative approach to the topic.

A few errors in writing mechanics kept this one from really soaring.

Lots of great imagery here--I could really picture the scene on the lawn and the writer. Well done.