The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some excellent points. Thanks for sharing.
04/30/10
Oh, that's an interesting story. I would have liked to have seen you tell more about Arthur in your entry.
05/02/10
I would have liked to hear more of Arthur Stace's story, too. Writing "eternity" on the sidewalk intrigues me, but why did he and what happened when he did? I found that there was a lot of repetition in your entry, and if you removed it, you would have lots of space to tell more of the story.
05/03/10
Oh, I'd definitely like to read more about this interesting man!

I agree with your previous commenters, and find this not particularly on topic, but intriguing nevertheless.