The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some excellent points. Thanks for sharing.
Oh, that's an interesting story. I would have liked to have seen you tell more about Arthur in your entry.
I would have liked to hear more of Arthur Stace's story, too. Writing "eternity" on the sidewalk intrigues me, but why did he and what happened when he did? I found that there was a lot of repetition in your entry, and if you removed it, you would have lots of space to tell more of the story.
Oh, I'd definitely like to read more about this interesting man!

I agree with your previous commenters, and find this not particularly on topic, but intriguing nevertheless.