The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/10
Wow! Now that would be quite a writing job!
This is a great interview and a fresh approach on the topic.

There were a few minor editing details- an extra quotation mark or a capital letter when it should have been lower case, but these typos can be fixed easily.

Your dialogue was believable and interesting.
I liked your unique view on the topic, it was a nice change of pace.
05/03/10
What an original idea!

There are some problems with punctuation, but more importantly, I was expecting some sort of 'kicker'--a lesson, a twist, some 'take-away' from this story which I didn't find.

I liked that you used a fictional President, to avoid strong feelings either for or against the current one. This wasn't about politics; it was about a speech writer, and that's a good thing.
Very Entertaining. I could read entries like this all the time