The Official Writing Challenge
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Since the bulk of your piece is borrowed from other writers, I can only comment on the last paragraph.

What YOU wrote shows a tremendous amout of writing talent. Trust your own words in your next entry. You will excell.
There was a depth to this even though the majority of it was quoted. You created a statement and ended it very well with your own words. Interesting.