The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! The days of Dick and Jane. You certainly mastered the voice of a first grader.
You took me back fifty years.
Thanks for the trip down memory lane.
How important those first "readers" were to us.. this brought back memories for me too... very creative entry.
I loved being able to see through Sue's eyes, and you did a great job making her thoughts flow together with the descriptions. Excellent story.
I could easily relate to the little girl. It was almost like you were describing my kindergarten days.

Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level. Good job.