The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/10
Well written.
Though elementary in theme, a good deal of thought went into this one.
good job.
04/25/10
The names of the kids and their roles was clever. It reads like one of Aesop's fables. Nice job.
Interesting use of nicknames. I did something similar in my story, and liked it. However, I wondered while reading this whether the teacher would have called them "Phonics" or "Thinker" out loud. I'd think she'd use their real names when addressing them, and call them by their nicknames in her head. Still, it was fun to read about how the children helped each other out. Good story. :)