The Official Writing Challenge
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Felt Angela's anger, (so good job)and Scott came across as doing a good work to expose the organization's priority of making money over helping pregnant Mothers. Just wasn't sure which POV the author was trying to support so perhaps the story would be more powerful if you wrote more about the oppositions Scott faced in his line of work as a Christian, if, this is in fact, your point. If not, I apologize for "my" misunderstanding :)
04/25/10
A great way to get your message across. I would have liked to hear more of the back and forth between the protesters and the editor, but I enjoyed this.
04/25/10
I wasn't quite sure what the point was. I felt like I was reading the middle of an account and wanted to see the end. You had a few spelling and grammar errors that you could have corrected with a little more editing. But your dialogue was good and I could picture the setting.