The Official Writing Challenge
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Important message, and like how you used a young girl to point out how only God's word can truly comfort us when we are heavy and face uncertainty.
04/24/10
I enjoyed this story very much. It had an excellent message. Whenever you submit anything, be sure to check your spelling. Also, in one or two spots in the story, you seemed to change tenses. Other than that, your story was very well received. Blessings, Laura
04/25/10
I liked how Lucy turned to scripture and received comfort. Her search for comfort was very realistic. I was a little confused about her age, though. Maybe you could have made that clear in the first few sentences.