The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/10
I am an official addict of your writing! When your characters are scared, so am I. When they are out of breath, so am I.

Clever, engaging, imaginative and fun!
04/22/10
Whimsical and very engaging.
04/23/10
*laughs* That was GREAT! I loved reading that, especially the part about the White Witch. I'm glad you kept her most classic line, good old Turkish delight. I'll always wonder what it tastes like.
04/23/10
"She chanced a quick look" is a gem of a line, and the pacing was very well done. right on topic and an enjoyable read. the ending was a bit anti-climactic for me, I think it'd be improved (in keeping the pace through the ending) if she gets the friend to discover and join in...but this was some good writing.
04/25/10
Hehe, fun! Loved the imagination run amok. By the way, it's a good idea to credit the authors whose characters you used. Fun mix of cast.
04/25/10
Excellent! A lovely trip through the world of fantasy.
04/25/10
LOL! I enjoyed your references to Tolkien's and Lewis' works in this bit of fantasy. Super creative work!
04/26/10
QuothTheRaven, I've found yours. Super story!!
04/27/10
Very enjoyable read. I think you've made me a Fantasy convert.
04/27/10
This is great. I could feel the excitement and fear in the MC