The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job in writing this, and wonderful message about mercy and completely trusting God.

Really enjoyed how humble you showed David to be. Your use of the topic is right on target.
04/18/10
Great re-telling of this story. Your dialogue was good and you made the setting come to life.
04/19/10
Excellent writing and use of the topic phrase. This is definitely my favorite so far on this level!