The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good message of the reality of being influenced by "worldly words", as you put it. Romance novels are a misleading temptation to most all of us women with a deceptive alluring of what true romance is.

Although, there are those who will definitely disagree, also liked your mention of the Left Behind series, which I find to be great reading and enlightening as well.

It is good to remember that there is always hope in Jesus. :)
04/17/10
Interesting character study.

I see tons of potential here--would love to read the same story in a less dispassionate voice, one that puts us in your characters thoughts and feelings rather than narrating them.

Very good title!
This is a wonderful well-told story.