The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/10
This was good reading.
04/15/10
I enjoyed reading this piece. Well done
04/15/10
Great story, well written and very entertaining.
This is the 3rd article where I have learned a new word and am pleasantly amused :)
And lastly...excellent job with the topic!
04/15/10
Very good story.
04/15/10
Wonderfully written! It really takes the reader back to the era of the knights. The topic is very well demonstrated in the story as well. I think this one has a good chance of winning! :)
04/15/10
Enjoyed this very much.
04/17/10
Very nicely written. How wonderful to be able to make peace.
04/19/10
Great description. Bear agrees with the above comments.
04/19/10
Well done!
04/19/10
Great story and well told. Very, very good!
04/20/10
This flows beautifully with description and dialogue both of which help to carry the story line and engage the reader to the end. Keep this up and I wouldn't expect to see you in the beginner's level for long.
04/20/10
Realized I never left an actual comment on this! D=

Like I said before, I like it. -nod- Well writ and well thought.

I'll try to get a full critique written and sent soon. ;)
04/20/10
Yay! I hope Rolland learned a thing or two. You've written a wonderful compelling story. I enjoyed this!
04/22/10
Yay, Caity!!! :D I told you you would win! ;)
04/22/10
Hey, super congrats on 1st place... (I can't believe this is your first entry, Wow!)