The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome!
Heartfelt and emotionally engaging for the reader and an excellent reminder of the POWER of love.

Also found your use of the topic very, very creative.
I've had God tell me the same thing, Get up and start writing. How wonderful that He provides us with a way to soothe our broken spirit.
04/19/10
This story really drew me in.

Be careful that you don't switch tenses (past to present and back again).

This was a very satisfying read.
04/22/10
I LOVED your take on the topic! Writing is often how I express myself to God and find gentle healing in it.

You might want to italicize your MC's inner thoughts and her letter to set them apart.

Sooo glad she got the call at the end! Good job!