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Excellent job conveying a Godly message of God's love versus men's rules.

Also found this to be a very unique and perfect take on the topic. Well done in my opinion!
Your story reminds me of the Amish and Mennonite Churches in my area. I'm glad your parents were brave enough to read the entire Bible, not just the parts the leaders deemed acceptable.
04/17/10
I really liked this take on the topic. Even if I had a different viewpoint from yours (which I don't), you expressed your views very well, kept the descriptive pace working well, and followed up your ideas with appropriate outcomes. Well done!
04/19/10
Absolutely beautiful--I was riveted.
04/19/10
Thank you for this powerful sumation of how to be free from religion. This is the key to the future of the church all over the world.
04/20/10
Very nicely done. True. Emotional. Powerful.

My favorite paragraph was the final one. I enjoyed the entire piece, but it was the last paragraph, which held it all together.