The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed your talent for descriptions. I could visualize myself sitting beside you and seeing what you were seeing. Especially fond of: the ocean's heartbeat :)

Double spacing between paragraphs, makes for easier reading.
You have a beautiful sentiment and i understand you are saying how powerful God's word is, but it might have been a little off topic.
Your descriptions were so vivid and I felt like I could hear and see the birds and the winds of the ocean.
Your words had a very powerful meaning to me.
04/17/10
I can definitely tell that this piece came from the pen (or keyboard) of a natural born writer. :)
You have a beautiful and captivating style of describing God's creation.

Keep that pen writing!
04/19/10
Gorgeous writing--your imagery is beautiful.

Teensy quibble: I'm not sure how "on topic" this is.

But it's wonderful writing; you have a real gift. Hope to see lots more from you here.