The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved Murray's courage to share "the most" amazing story of all...Jesus . Also really lked your description of the boy with the :blonde crew cut stubble to bristle as if he were electrified. :)
03/20/10
Wonderful object lesson in this children's story--it's the sort of story I remember from Sunday School papers.

Errors in spelling and punctuation distracted me a bit--perhaps you could have someone double-check for errors before you submit?

I was touched by your main character; he was very well written.