The Official Writing Challenge
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You described these breathtaking events, you've been blessed to see, well. I enjoyed your comparison, actually, (non-comparison) to the awe-someness of meeting our Savior, face to face.
03/20/10
You really made me want to visit these falls--great job with the atmosphere.

There were punctuation errors that, if edited, would bump this piece up quite a bit.

Perfect title, and wonderful revelation at the end--well done!
03/26/10
Beth, congrats on your highly commended award!