The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow-less, too cute and very original. Your dialogue was great. Good Job!
This was and interesting and well written story. You are really talented!
03/20/10
The present tense works very well in this story--it gives the story a sense of immediacy which is appropriate, given the urgent situation.

I wondered why Christina was allowed to fly so far into her pregnancy--and there were a number of sentence fragments (not the intentional ones in the immigrants' broken English) that made this maybe more choppy than you intended.

Love your title, and your extremely creative use of the topic word.
03/22/10
I enjoyed the story also. I did wonder why they spoke broken English to one another, rather than there native tongue.
04/09/10
I would NEVER have thought of the name of the baby being the Writer's Challenge Name of the article Wow-less.How original! Oh WOW!