The Official Writing Challenge
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What a spectacular scene you painted with the windows of Heaven being opened. This was done so very well and your dialogue was great. Good Job!
Creative POV!

My only comment--and it's very minor--was that before the setting became clear, I thought of Jobeth as a girl's name, and it threw me a bit.

This was definitely a "Wow" moment if there ever was one!
I especially liked the boys' conversation around the fire, it was very realistic. Good job.
Kathleen, congrats on your second place! Great job