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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Wow! (03/11/10)

TITLE: Whispered Wonder
By Nicole Campbell
03/16/10


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There are some things that are just amazing:
How God is the Father, Holy Spirit and Son,
How He makes wings to fly and legs to run
How He shows grace and mercy to a sinner like me
And because his son died we can be set free

There are a lot of things we canít comprehend:
How God creates universes, yet the tiniest bug,
How if we sin His Spirit gives our heart a small tug,
How there are still creatures not yet discovered
And how God pours out forgiveness so that weíre totally covered

There are many things that are really astounding:
How He crafted me so preciously in my motherís womb,
How after Jesus died he defeated the tomb,
How He created sweet and sour and bitter as well
And our beautiful senses of touch, sight and smell

And so with a collective sigh we say wow!
At all the things God has given us now
And that is why we wish to rejoice.
And search through nature for His whispered voice.


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Adrie Zandbergen03/18/10
Such a sweet poem and it describes the WOW very well.
Well done.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 03/18/10
This is outstanding. It has a beautiful flow to it and an incredible message. You have a great gift to be able to write such an intense poem.
Dana McReynolds03/18/10
Lovely poem!
AnneRene' Capp 03/18/10
Awesome poem in every respect and I loved your Title!
Jan Ackerson 03/20/10
I like the 5-line structure of this poem, and the unique rhyme scheme.

The meter was just a tad bumpy, but all in all this is an excellent poem. Well done!
Joan Campbell03/21/10
Such a beautiful poem! A reminder to keep our eyes open to all the gifts God gives us every day, from the smallest taste-bud to the tallest mountain.

He has also given you a beautiful gift - keep writing and developing it!
Beth LaBuff 03/22/10
Your title is beautiful and sets the tone for your wonderful thoughts in this poem. Very nice work!
Yvonne Geldenhuys03/23/10
O so beautiful and so true. Thank you for opening my eyes to such wonder. Keep writing - you clearly inherited the writing gene!
Pam Ford Davis 03/25/10
Beautiful! Great Job!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 03/25/10
CONGRATULATIONS, My young friend, the fact that you are so young should scream how talented you are in spreading the message of God! I am impressed as always by you!
Adrie Zandbergen03/25/10
Congratulations Nicole, I'm so proud of you. Your very first entry! Don't get dissappointed the next time, because you can't do any better!
Jesus Puppy 03/25/10
Well done, and a great way to make a good start. Keep at it and you work will definately shine.
Sarah Elisabeth 03/26/10
This was really good! Thanks for taking me back to the simple (yet awesome) things of Him.

Congrats on your first place win, see you in level 2!
Charlotte Maccallum04/12/10
Hi Nicole. Really like this piece. Congrats on the win!!