The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree with you, having the power to decide who does or doesn't make it to Heaven, is a frightening thought! This is very tought provoking.
03/19/10
Yes, God is omniscient, and He is omnipresent. His transcendence is supreme throughout the universe.

He is the Author, and we are His characters.

He is in control, and we obey and follow Him. Very good!
03/20/10
Thought-provoking, indeed.

I realize that the topic of "Wow" begs for exclamation points, but they are best avoided in narrative. Many of them can be edited out in favor of strong word choices.

Keep writing--would love to read more along this line.