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What a great story of romance. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Put a smile on my face and yes, wow says it all!
03/20/10
What a cool thing - and yes, definitely a God/Wow thing. Thank you for sharing!
Very good
03/20/10
Cool--I'd love to hear how he got your cell number!

This was fun to read, and I'd have like more--perhaps the dialog between the two of you. That would make it more "show" and less "tell".

Very good entry.
A love story for sure. I wanted to know though, why childhood sweethearts hadn't spoken in thirty years and a quick summary of that period. Sounds like chapter two is in order.
03/22/10
ah, sweet, heart-warming... a definite "Wow!" moment for you! I wanted more... :)
03/23/10
this had such an honest, genuine feel to it. Good job on this joyful story!
03/23/10
Wow, I hope this is a true story! I enjoyed this beautiful tale of Providence and long-lost love!