The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story! Although the ending is a little much to have written on a postcard. Creative! Thanks for sharing!
09/07/05
I'd like to know how Clarissa responded--although it's hard to imagine anyone not responding positively to a supernatural postcard!
09/12/05
Creative idea, although a lot of writing for a postcard. But we can't reason with the supernatural.
09/28/05
I know, the message would have worked better if it was not on a postcard - but for the sake of the challenge, eh.
It's a good message and you write well, it's just this was a bit of a stretch for the topic. But we're both beginners, so "hey!" thumbs up!
10/03/05
Awesome twist to the subject! Great job - and I'd be suprised if anyone could shy away from this eternal salvation gift. =)