The Official Writing Challenge
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There were some really cute lines in your poem that I enjoyed alot.
This poem was cute, and yet, brought out so many truths. I feel that it was really well done. There is something about rhyme that convicts, shames, gives joy and then peace. I really enjoyed this one.
This was a great poem that told a wonderful message. The only thing that niggled at me a little was the line about I, as it should be about me and wouldn't interfere with the rhyming sequence. But no matter what this was an outstanding poem that showed incredible talent. With poems you're allowed a little leeway with the grammar anyway. So again I say Great poem.
I just have to use "WOW", our next challenge word. This was superb for me (not a poet at all), but this was just so imaginative, fun and soul exposing. I can't seem to find the right words here, but this was great in my opinion!
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