The Official Writing Challenge
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This would make a great, short and understandable story for children.

I didn't know about the Cypress trees, so enjoyed this tidbit of knowledge.

Check out Ann and Jan's Grammar classes in the forums to help you polish up the grammar. These classes have helped me tremendously!
03/11/10
Yes, children would love this story but it does need a little repair here and there. Jan's classes are great. There is so much that I do not know, and this is one way to learn from a pro.
It was a cute rendition of Noah's Ark. In the last paragraph you used there incorrectly it should be they're or they were. I would have loved to see more details. It's a great start, but I was yearning for more. I did like how you presented it from a different angle. Everyone writes about the animals but you showed the difficulty in finding the exact wood that God had requested. It could also be the start of a great devotion.