The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. I just finished telling another author how God sends His own postcards to us in our life. This poem perfectly reflects that. Thanks for sharing!
09/07/05
Two contrasting relationships in a poem that's almost a ballad. With a little work on meter, this would be fantastic. Good job!
09/09/05
Simply lovely. I felt myself on my Father's lap, trying to please where I've let Him down. Bravo!
A beautiful poem and nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
09/09/05
I love it! Very well written.
09/12/05
Lovely poem. Rhyming couplets that speak of the Father's love.