The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a truly delightful story. Loved the pace, your dialogue and MC's, feistiness. Good Job!
This was a fun read, you took us right there. Excellent writing!
03/11/10
Shirley a winner!
A great story! I loved Shirley's attitude! Reminded me of my mother! She wasn't able to resist a challenge as well! Thank you!
03/11/10
The title is absolutely perfect!
What a fun read!

One small detail - the name of the town in the first paragraph is missing the t.

I enjoyed this very much.
03/11/10
This was really a fun story! It seems like"someone elce is always winning, right? Usually they deserve it, but a person just must have to work harder at it to get the perfection, and you did it! Great job of writing this.
When you first started writing about the bake off I pictured a cake made with sauerkraut!
I enjoyed your details and the humor.
03/17/10
Your title drew me in and did not disappoint in any way. Your characters were so believeable--liked their voices--I could truly picture Matilda and her arrogant attitude. Great job--well beyond a beginner's level. Looking forward to reading your future entries.