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A very cute and loving poem. Small suggestion would be to use white space to make it easier on the reader's eyes. But well done, I smiled at the picture you so aptly described.
03/05/10
My hubby rescues me from wee beasties, too--God bless them!

Work on making your meter more consistent--an extablished pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables. It'll make your poem easier to read.

This was very cute.
This was adorable to me. Loved the part where your strength you managed to find did not match your age. This gave me a great chuckle. Even shared it with my hubby and he chuckled too!
03/11/10
Charlene, congrats on your highly commended award! Don't forget to check the boards for the highest rankings:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=29085