The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting article. A bit confusing, it's hard to tell what's going on until the end, and even then it's blurry. Thanks for sharing.
09/07/05
This one confuses me. Maybe add a bit of narrative to the man's inner dialog, to explain what is going on.
I too am confused. Need to see something more.