The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/10
Awesome title!

Yours was one of the more creative uses of 'eek' this week. Work a little bit on 'show, not tell' to draw your readers in even more.
03/05/10
I think it would have helped to spell out exactly what was wrong with the woman.
I like your story and your honesty and think you did a good job on the dialogue. You got me wanting a continuation of her getting help. :)
Having suffered from a sever bout of anorexia when I was younger, this really helped me see the other side of things. It was well-written and touched my heart.