The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
The poem is great! "Eek?" perhaps implied, but a great poem anyway!
03/05/10
Definitely one of the best poems on this level. Well done! I like the implied nature of the 'eek'.
You did a great job of describing so many of the occurences in this world that grow wearily upon my heart as well. You did an even better job with your closing: Your rod and your staff protect and comfort me.
What a heart touching poem. You gave a great message, too.
03/11/10
Hey, congratulations Ruth, on your "highly commended!"
03/11/10
Congrats Ruth!