The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/10
Even though I only had little girls, the imagery here made me smile.

This had a very bumpy rhythm--if you look at it again, see if you can smooth out the meter. Feel free to PM me for suggestions on how to do that.

I love the mood of this sweet poem.
03/05/10
Some great reminiscences. But do take Jan up on her offer.
Enjoyable sentiments and made me reminisce as well!
03/07/10
I had to smile at the "Please donít forget the Snickers." I think you have some good memories in this!
I really liked the poem.
I don't think you needed the eek between each verse, sometimes it seemed like it just didn't fit.
But your memories and stories of what little boys leave behind was precious.