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03/04/10
this was a fun story.
03/04/10
Nice, funny story with a real setting. It could have happened to me. I love the ending with the cat.
03/05/10
Fun irony in your title.

This was short--I'd have loved some dialogue to help me to get to know you and your husband better, and more of the stray cat at the end.

Those eyes in the night...shudder...
03/05/10
I'm surprised your stray cat didn't polish off that mouse! Well told, just needs a bit more atmosphere.
Funny little twist at the end. I really liked your last line, I laughed out loud.