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03/04/10
i think that you meant to say Sunday morning, instead of Sunday more, but this was hilarious! Very well written, and a great article. Loved it all, especially the fact that you were greeted warmly in spite of your dress. Certainly a good Christian attitude. Campers can hardly carry their Sunday Best with them and need to worship too. Great job!
03/04/10
That was a fun story. It made me laugh too.
03/04/10
Very cute story!

There were some problems with singulars/plurals (check out your usage of 'hat' and 'pew' for the women), but all in all, this was a charming and delightful read.

Even though you had some typos (they can be easily fixed) I found myself chuckling at this amusing story. You did a good job of bringing the reader in and making me feel like I was there with you.
Many of the writers on this website also do a little editing, so we have to mention the typos. True, they can be easily fixed.

This was a fun read. I loved it, especially the last few paragraphs. When the witty pastor mention that hymn, I would have laughed out loud myself. Actually, I did while reading your story.

I would like to see this story in print. I just need some minor tweaks here and there but the humor and visual imagery are priceless!

Good job!
03/05/10
Having gone from a mega church to a country church to a small Midwest home church in a farm community, I can easily relate. Besides, God looks at the heart, not our outward dress. Well done.
Congratulations on the top 15 in your level!
03/11/10
Marilyn, congrats on placing 6th overall in Level 1! Be sure to check out the highest rankings page on the boards:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=29085