The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
Really cute!
03/04/10
I hate bugs so much that I felt squirmy just reading this! Well done.

The meter and pacing were just right for a child's poem.
This is great. I will admit I find bugs to be great company when one is lonely. I'm sure many people will be able to relate to this cute little poem, both the young and the young at heart.
I really enjoyed the topic and sentiment of the poem but had a difficult time getting into the flow since the rhyme scheme changed during the reading. I admit that most of that problem is my own as I have the same difficulty with some famous poetry as well. The poem was still very fun to read.
Very visual and creative. Good use of the assigned word. The meter (rhythm) is off in places, but overall it is a very nice piece.
03/05/10
Nicely done, and I do agree that the meter seems to be off here and there, but then you may have been distrated as something flew by.
03/11/10
I hate bugs, but I LOVED your poem. Great job, Holly! Way to go!

Congratulations on your placement, my friend!
03/11/10
Congrats AnneRene'!