The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your story of adventure of this missionary of the Gospel (is he?). My children will love to hear me read this to them, esp. you wrote it in present form of your tenses..."will he die or find the Yanomani tribe, and be able to tell them about Jesus"?
Thank you. Very good writing.
Wow what a suspenseful adventure. I found myself holding my breath. Well written and exciting to boot. Great job!
03/02/10
Well-written! Not your typical missionary story, and I enjoyed it.

Perhaps this is a teensy bit light on topic?

I loved your narrator's voice. This is a strong entry.