The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/10
Amen! Praise the Lord! My sentiments exactly.
Each scene was beautiful and a wonderful reminder to praise God everywhere.
03/02/10
Very, very good! I loved this.
03/03/10
I've only read a few so far but, if I read them all I don't think I would find one that I'd enjoy better than this inspiring piece. Colin
Beautiful! So well expressed. It brought to mind this phrase:
"Dance as if no one were watching, sing as if no one were listening; and live each day as if it were your last."
Thank-you for reminding me of this simple way to live.
03/03/10
Oh, Barb, you did a beautiful job with this.

You lost me slightly when you switched from first person to Jonathan. I thought the mc was the same in the first two, then wondered where they were in the third.

You brought the message out clearly among these lovely descriptions, and the scripture selections were perfect
03/04/10
Great job, Barb, I loved your vivid descriptions and the message you conveyed.