The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job of showing Jochabed's grief and faith. Read well too.
A wonderfully written piece. I identify deeply with Jochebed's mother-heart.

You've written your piece well. May the Lord flourish you more in His gift of writing he's given you.

Thank you.
A very nice rendition of a familiar story. I enjoyed the emotion and your eye for detail.
Very well done; I can't imagine how difficult that would have been!

I like your one-word title--just right for this story.