The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/10
Oh, this is beautiful. I LOVE Biblical fiction, and this definitely did not disappoint! Great descriptions.
I love how you describe Jesus as grinning. I believe He did grin and had a sense of humor. It was a delightful story.
03/02/10
Very well-written...nice job!