The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/10
Very well done!
02/27/10
Excellent!
02/27/10
This is the first time I ever thought about what Adam might have felt at that moment. Thank you for stretching my imagination.
02/28/10
What a great love story between Adam and Eve.
03/02/10
Fantastic! Your description made me feel like I was there. Plus, very skillful handling of story-telling techniques in general. Loved this one!
03/02/10
Well crafted take on this familiar story. Loved the last lines
03/20/10
Rachel, I'm going to feature this creative story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
03/21/10

Yay! Thanks, Jan!