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I particularly liked the way that you ended this. Not exciting,or disgusting, but down to earth.
Every mother on earth can relate to this! Found it clever and you spoke things I have experienced, just never really thought about, only complained about :)
I like how you compared God's love for us to that of a mother's for her child no matter how bad we smell:
We love our offspring no matter how old they get or how bad they smell at times, but our love for them can’t compare to the love our heavenly Father has for His children.

I too, want to be a fragrant smell to him. Thank you.
Great analogy to smells or aromas. Your comparisons and contrasts were pungent and left a lasting impression.