The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well done! The characters were likeable, the story was relevant. Thank you!
02/19/10
Very nice. I especially liked the description of the scenery from the top. Thank you.
02/19/10
I like how you started in the present to spring back in time. Very touching story which brought tears from, "I can be pushy too."
02/20/10
We all need a push sometimes. Thankfully for both of you, it was a "loving push." Loved the dialogue in this piece and the positive outlook of your mc.
02/22/10
What a great story! Well-written, good dialog and clear message! Kudos!
Good story and reading! Enjoyed your dialogue and especially the message.
What a beautiful love story. Congrats on placing. See you in the next level.
02/25/10
Beautiful story, Lisha! I could see the canyon, trees, and waterfall from your writing. Great turnabout with "who pushed who and when." Very good!! Congrats on your ribbon, too!!