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Cute story, I could really feel the sea sickness in the beginning.
02/19/10
Nice account of what it could be like on a vacation cruise ship. You could tie up the end to the beginning again for a little more concise story.
Yes, cute story. What hit me most is what a good sport you are!

02/24/10
Loved your story, Ruth! I've so been looking forward to a cruise vacation...now I'm having second thoughts. LOL
You gonna twist at the conference?
02/24/10
LOL! Loved your Rockin' story-- rockin' on the boat AND to the music! Now I have a couple of these songs running through my head! :)
02/24/10
I love the title, it's simply perfect, and the concert part was really fun! I thought it was cool how the character went from having an awful time to having an AWESOME time! Being called up on stage would be a blast. :)